{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"17664191","dateCreated":"1259797863","smartDate":"Dec 2, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"CarlyW_west09","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/CarlyW_west09","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/stenzel-hour-7.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17664191"},"dateDigested":1532768919,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Allignment","description":"You may want to think about placing all the pictures on one side or making one just a little bit smaller, for instance, at the top of your page the two pictures could be spaced out a little more, or just use one.
\n-carly","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"17491247","dateCreated":"1259555468","smartDate":"Nov 29, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"KrystinaEZ_west09","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/KrystinaEZ_west09","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/stenzel-hour-7.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17491247"},"dateDigested":1532768919,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Spelling","description":"Hey Becca,
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\nGood job so far. I really like the photos you chose. One thing you need to watch for is spelling errors.
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\nKrystina","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"17520709","body":"hey krystina thanks for the advice","dateCreated":"1259610546","smartDate":"Nov 30, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"rebeccad_west09","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/rebeccad_west09","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"17391251","dateCreated":"1259167722","smartDate":"Nov 25, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"IshmaelS_west09","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/IshmaelS_west09","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/stenzel-hour-7.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17391251"},"dateDigested":1532768919,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"grammar","description":"Hey Becca,
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\nThis is looking pretty good. There are several grammatical and spelling mistakes. I just wanted to let you know so Ms. Stenzel doesn't take off points.
\nGood Luck!
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\nIshy Fishy ><>","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"17269161","dateCreated":"1258937841","smartDate":"Nov 22, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"KristinaS_09","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/KristinaS_09","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/stenzel-hour-7.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17269161"},"dateDigested":1532768919,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"fixing","description":"Hey Becca! This is looking good so far. Just wanted to let you know, to make sure you check punctuation and grammer on this paragraph.
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\n "In 2006 she won 4 ACMS for album of the year, single of the year, top female vocalist and top new female vocalist, in that same year she won CMAs for female vocalist of the year and the Herizon award. But her first two awards were for her first single before he cheats and it won Breakthrough Video of the year and female video of the year. "
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\nThere needs to be commas in certain spots and to make sure her songs are titled either capitalized with quotation marks or capitalized in a slant form.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"17263613","dateCreated":"1258929187","smartDate":"Nov 22, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"TomHerrick","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/TomHerrick","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/stenzel-hour-7.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17263613"},"dateDigested":1532768920,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Ideas","description":"hi rebecca,
\n good idea with choosing carrie underwood, i would suggest also spacing within the paragraphs. if you havent already thought about this i would suggest putting a video of one of her newer songs.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"17240703","dateCreated":"1258829336","smartDate":"Nov 21, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"MattS_west09","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MattS_west09","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/stenzel-hour-7.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17240703"},"dateDigested":1532768920,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"idea","description":"Split the information up into paragraphs, also leave spaces in between main points.....
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\nexample, your demographics
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\nName.....
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\nbirthplace.....
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\nby leaving the space in between the 2 main points you have more emphasis on them because they stand out more.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"17204625","dateCreated":"1258735477","smartDate":"Nov 20, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"SarahF_west09","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/SarahF_west09","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/stenzel-hour-7.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17204625"},"dateDigested":1532768920,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Idea","description":"You should consider adding color and just entering your text so that its not all in one big paragraph.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"17134825","dateCreated":"1258645276","smartDate":"Nov 19, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"LaurenK_west09","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/LaurenK_west09","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/stenzel-hour-7.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17134825"},"dateDigested":1532768920,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Ideas","description":"Hey how are you?
\nHere are some ideas for your wiki.
\nMake Carrie Underwood stand out from the rest of the information. Also dont make everything bold just the main point because you lose what is important. Lastly Space between every Key point, like for instance after you are done talking about the Demographics space between that and the next thing you are going to talk about, which is going to be Background information and so on.
\nOther Wise keep it up its looking good.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"17097237","dateCreated":"1258581708","smartDate":"Nov 18, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"caitlynmc_west09","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/caitlynmc_west09","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/stenzel-hour-7.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17097237"},"dateDigested":1532768920,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Opinion","description":"Hey,
\nSo this looks really good to me I believe that maybe you should do a little more with spacing so it is easier to read. Other than that you are at a good start, it looks really good.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}